|SLC-S31/W4-“Creative Interpretation| The Object -“A Broken Clock”|

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That day at 10:10 AM, the world paused for me. It reminded me how my father's clock froze at this particular moment 18 years ago. I still remember my heart aching at this particular moment every day for years when I see this clock mocking my feelings inside. I hear phones buzzing, people aiming toward deadlines, but when I see 10.10, everything stops, every day.

Today I watched my coffee cooling on my work table at 10:10. I remembered my father had proposed ma a visit to Kashmir on this day, it was that moment my dad took his last breath. I rushed him to hospital, and then, the doctor's bowed head, "No more."

The clock broke, but it chose eternity as its hands declared, "That's it." I don't feel these stopped hands pointed failure, but to remind me permanently a snapshot where time stopped for me. Now when I watch it, it happens every day, twice a day, because I have this clock on my work table. I smiled faintly. I wind it no more, yet it reminds me of my dad twice every day.

What does the broken clock symbolize in your work?

In my text, 10:10, my broken clock symbolizes the defiance of time. Maybe the clock has stopped, but time never stops. It keep reminding you and captures life's most important moments.

For me, the frozen clock at 10:10 AM on my table takes me back to a time with my personal moments, when my father left me for his heavenly abode. It reminds me of my rushing hours to the hospital, an eternal sorrow that still exists without decay.

This stopped clock isn't defeated, it's a reminder. Its stopped hands, my obsession with my permanent loss. They remind me that true meaning lies not in endless motion but in memories in my mind and soul.

A rainy day, which could be a memorable moment for my mom, who always wanted to visit Kashmir, now left to a quiet acceptance of mortality. This clock refuses to tick forward but keeps me fully in the present. This clock on my work table is not something halted forever, but its rhythm is deeper than mechanics.

Is it a story of loss, hope, regret, or second chances?

My broken clock at 10:10 AM takes me back and reminds me of my loss, my eternal sorrow, my father's passing and the hospital rush. I feel an undying pain preserved in this clock's broken hands but I am not blaming this clock because it isn't mere grief but a hope.

I see hope through memories of that rainy day and my mom's unfulfilled Kashmir dreams that she remembered until the day she left this world but finally she accepted mortality.

It's not just a regret, though, my permanent loss, as this clock, even if stopped, is locking me in an unwanted stillness. Instead, it sits pretty on my work table, reminding me time marches on.

The stopped clock brings a deeper truth in my pain, proving that stillness also has a meaning beyond ceaseless striving. I feel pain, but in this pain and loss it brings a hope as it reminds me to cherish the present moments in my mind and soul.

What lesson does your interpretation carry?

From broken clock stopped at 10:10 AM, the deepest lesson for me is that stillness amid loss forges wisdom in people like me. This is my personal story, my father's departure, my hospital rush, my mom's unfulfilled Kashmir dreams on that fateful day show my raw truth.

The clock on my table doesn't symbolize defiance but it teaches us that time is unstoppable in all conditions no matter you feel happy or sorry.

This world is obsessed with motion, so it reminds me true meaning isn't of time is not always happy but we have to be practical.

We preserve all memories, sorrowful, hopeful, but they never change. This clock reminds me my present fully, my loss into resilient. For a practical person like me it further humanizes me that even "broken" things hold deeper truth.

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¡Holaaa amigo!🤗

Tu historia me llevó a pensar que, la hora cuando nos enteramos que un ser querido ya no forma parte de este mundo terrenal, quedará plasmada en nuestra mente y corazón... Te confieso que reflexionar en ello, me asustó y al mismo tiempo llenó de tristeza, porque perder a mi padre es una de las cosas que más miedo me da.

Te deseo mucho éxito en la dinámica... Un fuerte abrazo💚


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¡Muchas gracias por el apoyo!🤗💚

Thanks for visiting and making such a touching comment. That's right, we all have certain moment which put their time stamp on our mind and this one reminds me of my loss which will never be recovered.

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 4 days ago 

Please sir, post with steemit.com next time. Thank you!

And why should he do that? Does it affect the content or quality of his post?

 4 days ago 

Not all, it's because I would always need to log in before review, and I have other user who use other sites to post. I can't keep logging in and out to review an entry.

If he can avoid it during my challenge, that would be nice. He can use it for as much entries as he so wish. That's all!

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Anyone can use the frontend they like best. I don't know where's the problem.

I do it when Steemit is not opening but I understand your problem. I work on laptop so I do not have to login or logout but working on phone, true. I will post on Steemit only next time!