SEC-S30W4: Building a Fable | The title of your fable.
The tortoise who tried to outsmart his owner and the entire community
In the Akpata community, surrounded by fertile farms and trees, the people are always happy with themselves, living in peace and sharing everything they have among themselves. Mr. Mark is a well-known man in the community who decided to have a tortoise in his community.
This tortoise has been with him for years and during harvest season, the community decided to organise a big feast at Mr. Mark's house so everyone would bring food to celebrate their hard work.
The tortoise who lived in Mr. Mark's compound seems to be very clever but greedy at the same time. The tortoise so much loved food more than anything else, and when he heard about the feast that was to be hosted in the place he was, he began to think of a way to eat more than everyone else.
The community people agreed that everyone should bring one pot of food and that the food would be shared equally among everyone who would attend the feast.
As the tortoise heard about this, he secretly brought several empty leaves and hid them under his shell. When the food that the people contributed was served, the tortoise quickly filled the leaves with meat, rice, and soup, pretending he was just eating slowly.
Soon the people then noticed that the food was finished too quickly. A small boy observed him carefully and found out how the tortoise was hiding the food given to him under his shell. As the small noticed this, he called the attention of the elders around him.
The elders and some people of the community came and saw things for themselves and became angry with the tortoise. They boldly told the tortoise that greed would never bring respect and it cannot amount to anything good. As punishment, they made the tortoise return all the food he had hidden.
From that moment, the tortoise learned that wisdom is not about tricking others for selfish benefits but it is about living honestly with his owner and the community at large.
Moral Lesson:
Trickery and greed may work for a short time, but honesty and sharing the things we have or whenever that is given to us bring true respect and value than being greedy and tricky.
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Cc:- @marvinvelasquez
Thank God, the issue is resolved, and you got your points ☺️ I'm happy for you.
When I read through your post, it got me thinking about this creature, the tortoise 😂😂😂. Why always cunning and always trying to play smart, even as it's slow? When writing mine too, it got me laughing. How this creature from my childhood has been like this in all stories. ...
Thanks for sharing with us, the lessons on greed and been tricky. It's a good story to learn from.
Tortoise is a wonderful creatures and there are a lot of stories that I have heard about how wise tortoise is. Thanks for your support.
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Good job, i I will come back and do my bit in a few hrs. I'm in travel right now.
Greetings friend, your publication at first glance looks very good, however there are certain details that you omitted in your work:
Although the animals are humanized in the fable, they only interact with each other, they do not socialize with humans. You told us a story in which you changed the main character to an animal and the rest of the characters are human.
With only that detail I would have qualified your participation, but when checking plagiarism and content with AI I found a high percentage of content made with Artificial Intelligence, I'll give you the links so you can check it yourself:
https://www.duplichecker.com/es/ai-content-detector.php
https://www.zerogpt.com/es/
https://quillbot.com/es/detector-de-ia
If you consider that there is an error or you can justify the cause of this result, please let me know in a comment, until then I must consider your participation as invalid.
Thank you for your feedback. Honestly, I don't use AI or anything to write my content. What I usually do after writing my content is to use the Grammarly tool to perfect my English and punctuation marks as seen below. Also, I have written a similar story about the same tortoise. I have nothing much to say other than to allow you to grade it as it pleases. Even while trying to respond to you you can see how Grammarly was giving me a suggestion of the words I should use.
Anyway I don't trust these tools based on your response.
Just treat it as it pleases you without bias. Thanks
The applications to correct and make suggestions in writing have this problem, that's why I didn't want to rush and wait for your answer. I suggest that when you use it, put at the end of your posts that you have used this tool, in case when you check it gives a percentage in the use of AI.
Is alright, thank you and noted
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