nice job on the details :)
what do you draw with?
oh and one more thing, I personally prefer the "in progress" version. It's not as overloaded as finished version. Next time maybe consider using "negative space" as actual part of the drawing, it really opens up the composition and lets it breathe
cheers
I draw with a rotring isograph pen. I know what you mean with the drawing being overloaded, but that's what I do. I like to fill the page with as much as possible. Gives the viewer a lot to look at it, even if it is a bit overwhelming. NO BREATHING!