Folco’s Birth – Page 20
Next page !
Let's explore a bit of the island's past with Samson's memories.
I've found some pleasure at working on this, one even if it was a tough start confronted to the blank page.
Letting secondary characters tell their backstory opens to new storytelling ideas, and gives some life to the universe.
I've been surprised to discover what that Ol'Folco had done for his neighbourhood... I didn't know before the story told me the truth :p
I've worked a bit smaller than usually, trying to fill the page with more work. I just hope this won't make the whole stuff too hard to read.
Anyways, here we go :
As usually, an ebook version of the previous pages is free to download :)
PAGE 20
Here we are for today,
have a nice day, people !
Berien
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I am glad to see you taking the divergent path to tell the back story of a secondary character, Pascal :D I can imagine the secret gardens in the labyrinth of this city's belly.... Such a magical concept * ___ *
Always look forward to more pages, and I think you should also do one of those compilation of all the pages so far, once you completed an arc or so :D
Thanks liske :)
I've opted for the compilation on the fly just to be sure not to 'forget' to do it later, and also because it's an easy way to store and secure the pages at the same place without too much 'web logistics' : It's only a matter to drop a file in an archive without changing the link to the whole at each post :)
I might have to add a simple link to previous post instead, could be lighter for readers. I take any opinion on the topic :)
Hmm... not sure... maybe?
This sounds like what I usually say when people ask me stuff lol.
Good job working on this page. It's been 20 pages :D.
Thanks @scrawly 😊
Yes 20... For something I thought would be a 2 or 3 pages short experiment 😂
That's still a great training work on Manu levels, so let's see what will happen until the point I imagine being the last scene since day 1 😊
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