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RE: The Next Level - [Fictioneers Contest Prompt - Man vs Society]
The emotional beats were masterfully done. You fooled me for a long time until I saw those "he will enjoy her". Excellently cruel!
The emotional beats were masterfully done. You fooled me for a long time until I saw those "he will enjoy her". Excellently cruel!
Thank you for reading! I'm glad I was able to draw it out long enough for it to still hold some power at the end.