Fifty Word Challenge: Submission 01

happyhairdays (44)in #fiftywords • 8 years ago (edited)

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Every now and then he walks all the way to the fence. Probably wondering what lies beyond. He has never had the opportunity to venture beyond the confines; his is a life sentence! After looking deep into the beyond... It is business as usual scratching in the dust for grain.

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8 years ago in #fiftywords by happyhairdays (44)

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creatr (70) 8 years ago

"...his is a life sentence! After looking deep into the beyond... It is business as usual..."

This sounds heartbreakingly too much like my life... :O

Well done!

😄😇😄

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happyhairdays (44) 8 years ago

Hilarious!!

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cizzo (57) 8 years ago

I like the contrast of imprisonment but then at the end... business as usual. Well done @happyhairdays

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happyhairdays (44) 8 years ago (edited)

Thank you @cizzo, I pleased you've enjoyed it!

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lanmower (60) 8 years ago

Love it, I am personally a big fan of short-form posting.

And like chickens too :)

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happyhairdays (44) 8 years ago

Thank-you, I will be doing plenty of these fifty worders. It's like doing a puzzle.

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khadija14 (36) 8 years ago

Oh...what a surprise...it was the chicken!!!Interesting turn of events!!😊A great interpretation of the prompt.

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happyhairdays (44) 8 years ago

I'm please that it was a pleasant surprise for you...

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khadija14 (36) 8 years ago

It sure was @happyhairdays

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rvag5 (53) 8 years ago (edited)

Hello @happyhairdays, An important message

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happyhairdays (44) 8 years ago

@rvag5 - Thank-you my dear! I hope all is well with you!?

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jayna (69) 8 years ago

This is wonderful. At first I thought it was about a prisoner serving a life sentence and looking beyond the fence at some chickens. And then it suddenly clicked. Well done!

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happyhairdays (44) 8 years ago

I'm truly pleased you've enjoyed the piece, and that I could hold the element of surprise till the end.

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jayna (69) 8 years ago

You did indeed!

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happyhairdays (44) 8 years ago

Thank-you @jayna, much appreciated!

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