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RE: Revenge of Yayo Che - Freewrite A finishthestory entry
Wow! She fights in the tradition of the Amazons. You know your armament. Gave a sense of reality to this. Effective telling, fast-paced. You really got into the action, and that drew me in.
Thanks! She is so endearing thanks to the background by @theironfelix I want go back and add more details.