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RE: Surprise in the Forest WE-Write freewrite Week 1
I thought it was already interesting how Debra was taking charge and getting them to safety, but Superman burst into the scene and it was a terrific surprise! 😄I couldn’t help but smile through the rest of it. And poor Randy, he’s got quite the competition for Debra’s attention.
From the first part of the story, it seemed to me that Randy was into chilling out, while Debra was not only enjoying being at the campsite, she was still watching out for the kid with the stick, while to Randy it was a minor intrusion into his relaxation. That's when I decided to make Debra the responsible one, and then I degraded Randy's manhood even further, LOL.
Can you imagine how conflicted he was when Superman took off with Debra, since he was in awe of him?