The story unfolds very naturally, from the curiosity of a little kitten named Magnu to his danger and finally finding a new shelter. The behavior of the little girl, the intensity of the sun, and the presence of a vulture in the sky—the horror of the outside world through the eyes of a small animal—are brought to the fore in simple language. In my opinion, your own assessment, citing the film Flow, is a very accurate observation. The emotional basis of the story is beautiful, but to make it to the awards stage, the plot needs to have a little more depth and dramatic conflict. The human appeal of the story would have been greatly increased if Magnus had spent a little more time and elaborated on this place where he was emotionally torn between his birth mother and the love of his new shelter. You are absolutely right; the main idea and creativity are clear here. If it could have been polished a little more and arranged on a larger scale, it could have been a very strong screenplay. Best wishes to you in this contest. 😊