RE: Art Explained by a Writer: Assassination of General Venancio Flores (n.d.)
Your writing is impeccable from beginning to end. The narrator seems to have a premonition that something was going to happen to him that sunny day. Perhaps that's why he remembered his grandmother and her teachings about how he should dress, just in case death came unexpectedly. And while someone dies, the others continue with their normal lives, talking about soccer and worrying about the high cost of living.
It's always fascinating to read you. Hugs.
Impecable tu texto de principio a fin. El narrador parece presentir que ese día soleado algo iba a pasarle. Quizás por eso recordó a su abuela y sus enseñanzas sobre cómo debía ir vestido, por si acaso la muerte le llegaba de manera sorpresiva. Y mientras alguien muere, los demás siguen su vida normal, hablando de fútbol y preocupándose por el alto costo de la vida.
Siempre es fascinante leerte. Un abrazo.