You finished meal looks so yummy. I wish you could send some to me via my email. Hahaha.
I went through your story. You wrote well. However, you need grammatical and punctuation corrections.
And expand your words count to approximately 500 to 800.

Meanwhile I just learnt you're a newcomer. Please meet your mentor for proper mentorship.
Thank you for sharing how you spend your day with us.
Keep steeming 💙