SC-S30 | CineAtlas 60 Week 6 - Community Remake | [Behind Saidpur Art and Literature Market]

in Be Happy2 months ago (edited)

Hello, I'm @toufiq777

Hope everyone is well I am also fine by the grace of God.

Our life is like a movie. In this life there are ups and downs. While managing life, we have to face various obstacles at different times. After birth, our parents raise us. Then we grow up slowly. We get admitted to school. Then from school life we ​​go to college life. Then university life. Once our studies are over, we roam around for jobs. Some do government jobs and some do private jobs. Still others do business. Our life goes on with this. Then we get married and go into family life. We have children and daughters. For them, we have to engage in various kinds of work.

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An old corn seller

People of different classes and professions can be seen around us. They do different types of work to support their families. When you go out of the house, you will see all these things. In every city I live in. That city is a densely populated area. People of different classes and professions live in this city. Each person does one type of business. I went out this afternoon. I walked on the street for some time. Then I went to the railway line. I saw an old man selling corn next to the railway line. He also bought these corns for 5 to 10 taka per piece. He was selling them for 20 taka. This is a kind of business. He was making profit by selling corn.

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Scene of burning corn

A small child was with him. The small child was helping the old man. The child was peeling the corn. And the old man was burning the corns in the fire and selling them to people. Here both the child and the old man were working equally hard to earn a living. We do various things for the sake of life. In the same way, this old man and the little child were doing things for the sake of life. This scene is like a movie.

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The old man and the little child working with him

They are working so their family can survive. They are making a living from this small business. It took about 4 to 5 minutes to burn each corn. They were burning the corn on a coal fire. Corn is available during the hot season. It is currently hot. In the midst of this heat, the old man will sit next to this hot fire from afternoon to night and sell corn for the family. Anyone who does this understands how difficult the work is. Today I have presented a small cinematic video of the life struggle of an old man.





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Steem-atlas location[//]:# (!steematlas 25.78095 lat 88.896294 long Corn seller d3scr)

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Evaluation — CineAtlas 60 (Week 6: Community Remake)

Post: @toufiq777 — "SC-S30 | CineAtlas 60 Week 6 - Community Remake | [Behind Saidpur Art and Literature Market]"


Evaluation Summary (Week 6)

Criteria (Rubric /10)ScoreShort Comments
1) Weekly rule respected (Community Remake + 20–60 sec + required links) / 31.5 / 3.0The post includes a location pin and video, but the main Week 6 remake requirement is not properly fulfilled. The inspired participant and original post link are missing, which is a core rule of the challenge.
2) Originality of reinterpretation / 20.8 / 2.0The corn seller scene may be original as a standalone film, but the remake logic is not explained. It is not clear what previous entry was reinterpreted or how it was transformed.
3) Story clarity and creativity / 21.5 / 2.0The social idea is meaningful and easy to understand. The old man and child working together create an emotional everyday-life scene.
4) Video execution (framing, rhythm, visual control) / 10.7 / 1.0The subject is naturally interesting and cinematic enough for a short film. Minor deduction because the post does not clearly explain the remake structure or visual inspiration behind the execution.
5) SteemAtlas pin quality (relevant description + correct location) / 10.8 / 1.0The pin is present, but the location connection to a remake idea is not explained, which is part of the Week 6 expectation.
6) Engagement (Shot Breakdown comments on others) / 10.2 / 1.0The required Shot Breakdown comment links are not visible in the post, and even a comment below notes that mandatory points are missing.

Final Score: 5.5 / 10


General Comment

A meaningful everyday-life post, but a weak Week 6 remake entry. The corn seller scene has emotional value and could work well as a short film on its own, but it does not clearly follow the Community Remake rules. The post needs a clearly named source of inspiration, the original post link, and a short explanation of what was remade and how it became a personal version.

 last month 

You have a great post @toufiq especially as the street vendor is baking corn. Let me make it clear that your post is missing a few mandatory points in this post. I wish you the best though!

আমি এই পোষ্টটি না বুঝে করে ফেলছি। এখন আমি চাচ্ছি এটি ডিলেট করে নতুন করে পোষ্ট করার জন্য৷ আমি টেলিগ্রামে kouba01 কে মেসেজ দিয়েছি৷ তিনি পারমিশন দিলে আমি এই পোষ্ট ডিলেট করে নতুন করে পোষ্ট করবো৷

 last month 

I suggest you can edit it rather than deleting and reposing.

Thank you for the good advice. But I posted this on speemwatch. How do I remove the previous video?

 last month 

Find a matching prompt, keep the same video and edit the text. I can think this as the only solution in this case.