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RE: The Winter Raven Made This Its Hold

in CCC • 21 days ago

It's so true one year can make a world of difference and more one "small" event can. It pains me a little that her father was more important to her than her husband was. All he has left are the memories of her dislikes, a cleaning lady at home, and the likes of the cats (the fish he still catches). I hope the bowls don't smell by now.
I wonder if the nearest future still accepts people who are lost. For sure the gossipers will know who to clean up.

A great story, sad but great.

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     21 days ago 

    Thank you! I’m curious about your experience reading this. At what point in the story did you realize they were all dead?

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      It was always thick with carp, and he'd find himself thinking of how much his cats loved these fresh-water fish.

      and the confirmation

      Cobwebs hung undisturbed in the corners, and the leaden floorboard dust was thick - - preserved with a frantic map of feline tracks, a life still in motion.

      His daily excursion was a distraction from the radio silence at home - a silence so heavy it felt like an assault on his ears.

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       13 days ago 

      I'm glad the writing can convey that 💗💗💗

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