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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

in Story On Steem4 months ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

Your writing has described various experiences of school life in a wonderful way. It is not just a memory, but various aspects of school life, education, discipline, success, disappointment and learning places, have been presented in a logical manner, which is truly commendable. Your observations on class time and the role of teachers have impressed me.

The description of your position and feelings as a student was wonderful. You have not presented these experiences of getting good results and being loved by teachers from a place of appreciation, which is wonderful teaching. It has highlighted your sense of discipline and responsible mentality in front of us.

The teacher's motivation section is a particularly instructive aspect. Especially during the pandemic, the responsible role of the teacher has been beautifully highlighted. What you have said about the teacher-student relationship here is truly instructive.

The lesson you have learned from the experience of breaking trust in friendship highlights an important truth of life. This shows how much the experience of school life helps us in real life.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing2
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood1.5
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you2
Total8.5 Points
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 4 months ago 

Thanks for the points.