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RE: SLC33-W3: My Community, My Story – Transportation in My Area
Review/Grading Format
Category Points
| Content Quality | 3 |
|---|---|
| Original Photos | 2.5 |
| Storytelling relevant | 2 |
| Location | 1.3 |
| Creativity & Presentation | 1 |
| Total | 9.8 Points |
Review:
Railway transportation is perfect for long journeys, and it is usually the best for family travel, as the railway line in your community looks very clean and intact. However, your post would have been better if a train were shown. It seems the railway is more economical in your city, as I can see the crowd of people at the railway station.
Thank you for such a wonderful review considering my post in detail.