RE: Desafío Steemit Temporada 32 Semana 01 || "Escritos de hoy, recuerdos de mañana."—El diario personal.
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Reading through your personal diary it got me so emotional about the various health challenges with your relatives.Your uncle and another relative in the hospital .After,your uncle leaving spending some day with you to recover his health.You had to go to the hospital to visit your relative .His situation is critical because of negligence.What got me so emotional because you said the mother is having breast cancer and the father lungs cancer .What a pathetic situation that a whole family will be sick of terrible illnesses .I pray for healings upon them in Jesus name🙏.
My observation is that you didn’t mentioned the day,month and year of your diary while writing .How can you write a beautiful personal diary without mentioning date.You know well that the challenge has date limit.I can’t assume your date because you might be writing out of the date given .Please respect rules of the challenge . The diary start with date to make the reader clear of which day you are writing .
. We have assessed your assignment post , below captures our assessments.
| Criteria | Remark |
|---|---|
| Real user | ✔️ |
| #steemexclusive | ✔️ |
| Free of Plagiarism | ✔️ |
| AI Article | (Human text!) |
| Bot free | ✔️ |
Comment/Recommendation
- The beauty of diary writing: 5.5marks
- Following the rules: 1.5marks
- Markdown Usage: 0.8mark
- Comments: 1 Mark
Scores| 8.5/10