Hi @karobiamin, thank you for participating in the "Week-03: "Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—Health Diary."

Reading through your health diary can see you have various meals from contenting to evening to keep your body.It was not just like that but spending some time to take care of your child .Mom had to cook beef and fried rice for people ,Food prepared by our mothers are always sweet and tasteful . You ended your day by sending a list to your husband for the things your daughter need .

My obervation first is that you have not written the date of your health diary .How can you write your health diary without mentioning date in your write up. We have date limit for the contest this makes us to know if you are within the date given in the challenge. Secondly,markdown not well applied , writing is not in order , there are many markdown to make your writing beautiful , presentable and more interesting to read. You made mentioned of the food you ate to keep your body healthy .You failed to give us health tips like the quantity of food can exactly consume .Imean health advise to educate others .While not write it from your own health challenges if you have .Various things one need to do to keep the body healthy. I think if you take some this recommendation it’s easy grap more marks well next time .

. We have assessed your assignment post , below captures our assessments.

Criteria	Remark
Real user	✔️
#steemexclusive	✔️
Free of Plagiarism	✔️
AI Article	(Human text!)
Bot free	✔️

Comment/Recommendation

• The beauty of diary writing: 3.9marks
• Following the rules: 1marks
• Markdown Usage: 0.6 mark
• Comments: 1 Mark
  Score :6.5/10