Hi @limon88, thank you for participating in the "Week-03: "Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—Health Diary."

Hello , I can see today is your off day from work and you had a splendid with family Eating various types of food and fruit. Rice and bread , chicken soup and fresh mangoes .Y ou made mentioned how it’s important to body . Your evening was well spend at the bank enjoying nature and leisure.

My observation is that you focused your health diary on things you consumed during the day , but you limited in telling us how important it to the body , the quantity one need to eat to stay healthy .It was good for you to even give some tips by educating with nutritional food you consumed during the day .Your health diary does not carry weight of explaination base on health tips .You didn’t comments on others people post atleast three authors .This shows engagement.Nodate was included on your writeup .How can you write a health diary without date.

. We have assessed your assignment post , below captures our assessments.

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Real user	✔️
#steemexclusive	✔️
Free of Plagiarism	✔️
AI Article	(Human text!)
Bot free	✔️

Comment/Recommendation

• The beauty of diary writing: 4.5marks
• Following the rules: 0.8marks
• Markdown Usage: 1 mark
• Comments: 0Mark

Scores| 6.3/10