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RE: "SC-S32/W5-"Escritos de hoy, recuerdos de mañana."—El diario de trabajo.

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Hi @mariagood, thank you for participating in the "Week-05: "Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—Work Diary."

Reading through your nature I can see it’s blended with other activities of the day .I write up is more of school .Making sure you are on time in the university campus and attending classes.You engagement during accounting lessons is well as you did the right .I can see it was a busy day at the university campus .Also the school bus that disappointed didn’t affect your classes for the day .After, returning home you still have enough time after eating to make sure you do your home work well.

My observation is that you edited your cover picture which against the rules of the challenge .you got a good work diary but it was important for you to start writing by telling us about your plans of the day , then challenges you encountered which you discussed but did not tell us at the end how you over come it .You made mentioned in writing but didn’t tell us full detail.

. We have assessed your assignment post , below captures our assessments.

Criteria Remark
Real user ✔️
#steemexclusive✔️
Free of Plagiarism ✔️
AI Article (Human text!)
Bot free ✔️

Comment/Recommendation
  • The beauty of diary writing: 5.5 marks
  • Following the rules: 1.8marks
  • Markdown Usage: 1 mark
  • Comments: 1 Mark

Scores| 9.3/10

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 2 days ago 

Thanks very much