Hi @santi06, thank you for participating in the "Week-05: "Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—Work Diary."

It feels good helping your mother to do sone shopping .i can se you are always there for mom. Sorry for the earthquake disasters, I learned it has affected part of Venezuela and many people have died .Due to change of weather,I can see you live baking , I pray bless your baking business . Having a new place for your barbing is important , congrations wishing more costumers .

My observation is that you didnot tell us your plan if the day in your work diary and how you will achieved it . You make your writeup looks like normal diary game .you were supposed to tell if your expectation for the day were achieved and how I’d overcome it .To make write up interesting.

Lastly you didn’t engage on others post atleast by dropping three comments on individual rules.Your pics are not explaining your activities of the day but more of using thesame caption which make it meaningless.please always try to ready the rules before participating.Drawing the readers attention with good introduction of your write is very important to make it captivating by linking it with the topic .

. We have assessed your assignment post , below captures our assessments.

Criteria	Remark
Real user	✔️
#steemexclusive	✔️
Free of Plagiarism	✔️
AI Article	(Human text!)
Bot free	✔️

Comment/Recommendation

• The beauty of diary writing: 4.5marks
• Following the rules: 1.5marks
• Markdown Usage: 1 mark
• Comments: 0Mark

Scores| 7/10