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RE: SLC33-W1: My Community, My Story – A Need to Know Place Around Me

Review/Grading Format

Total Score

Category Points

Content Quality3
Original Photos2.5
Storytelling relevant1.6
Location1.4
Creativity & Presentation1
Total9.5 Points

Review:
Schools are important places in each community. It is where people gain knowledge, connect, and know about their community, just as you grew up acquiring knowledge from the school is same way, the younger generation is acquiring it from the same school.

In most countries, primary school is the beginning of education, and admitting young children shows how interested the people are in learning. The flagpole is usually where students gather to be addressed, which in some places they called such place assembly ground. You should have developed your story in the form of storytelling.