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RE: SLC33-W1: My Community, My Story – A Need to Know Place Around Me

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Total Score

Category Points

Content Quality2.8
Original Photos2.5
Storytelling relevant2
Location1
Creativity & Presentation0.9
Total9.2 Points

Review:
Hospitals play a vital role in our community and country, and having a standard hospital in a place would prevent people from having to travel abroad for any medical issues, unlike in my country, where the government would travel to foreign countries for treatment because they have neglected the hospitals in Nigeria. Children are prone to illness easily and thank God for the good health of your daughter.

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Thank you for the kind feedback.
It's worrying. When health is put aside, where can we hope?