OPEN MIC WEEK 39 / @happy2b / First entry /Original Song written for openmic week 39 titled -- "Wanted"
Lyrics:
I always fight
the rhythm of the night
it never wanna let me go.
Its imposible to keep
the present company
of my broken heart and soul
So I take a ride
on the open tide
night after night
Its imposible to keep
my present company
its imposible to sleep
its imposible to be yah
The demons say
its time to play
and turn their little heads to war
All man kind
put em in a line
cause all they ever want is more
I'm here to say
Not all of us are born that way
Its imposible to keep
the light we seek
from dimming in the deep
its imposible
to see me....cause were
Were wanted, Wanted for MURDER
The murder, of all my love
Were wanted, Wanted for MURDER
The murder, of all my love
Tinsel shines,
buy another kind
hang on the door
put it on your shrine
Bottle up the fear
Sell another cure
take another shot
have another beer
boom shot life
aint got no care
sell your soul
so theres nothing to be ware of
The demons say
were better off to die that way
Its imposible to keep
the light we seek
from dimming in the deep
its imposible
to see yah...cause were
Were wanted, Wanted for MURDER
The murder, of all my love
Were wanted, Wanted for MURDER
the murder of al the love.
Ok so there it is...my first open mic entry. This is for open mic 39. Im exited to be inspired to write again. Its been awhile for me. I am struggling between posting what this song means to me or not. A part of me wants to see what you guys think about it without possibly jading any perceptions by revealing my own. Another part of me wants to explain where this song is coming from for me and what it means to me. I think I'll just post it and see if anyone out there wants me to share what it means to me. Hell, (self conscious chuckle as I clear my throat) Im so new here, there is a good chance no one will really see this anyway (long silence with one lone cricket that introduces itself) ...non the less...I am still super exited to be inspired. Inspiration--in my experience-- has always been a beautiful lover that comes and goes as she pleases. There is nothing more delicious in my world than inspiration. This serves better as my introduction than my "introduce yourself' posts. Nothing is more me than the music that comes through. Thanks for listening.
I sure would like to hear what you guys think. Thanks again.
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STOPreallly really really love this your voice reminds me of the lead singer of crash test dummies... this was awesome. i would love to sing with your voice im taken up. the song is fantastic love love love love
SWEET!!! I am honored by your reaction. It always feels a bit vulnerable to share art that comes through me. I know not everyone will like it but it sure does feel good when someone does!!!
Love pianos.
Ya...me too...they seem to be attracted to me as well. People are always giving them away for one reason or another and they find a home with me on a regular basis. I thought this was normal till friends of mine pointed out they never heard of a piano being given away. We got some kinda connection--piano's n me.
Hii @happy2b, Nice to Meet U
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Welcome to STEEM!
Thank you!
Thanks for playing Steemit Open Mic
Thanks for hosting! Awesome idea!! Im happy to be part of it.
Great song. I like the rhythm, and have a couple of interpretations of the lyrics.
I totally agree with that too!
Hey thanks for the shout out!!! What an awesome musicians community here!!!! You mention having a couple of interpretations of the lyrics.....you have me curious.....what are they?
It's great isn't it!
I guess my main thought was the internal fight against the dark side of human nature that most of us have to some (though differing) extents, and the guilt of starting to succumb in the face of a world that seems to embrace it.
I think that most good songs mean different things to different people though, so wouldn't be surprised if that's a long way from what it means to you!
Thats what I love about it... one song can mean so many different things to so many different people. Especially if there are no words!!!! Anyway...that is not far off at all...in fact that is a big part of what I was expressing. I am very happy that you got that....that is awesome.
Really nice perform, so much talent! I follow! I posted my first song if you want to check it !
Hey thanks for the positive feedback. Ill check out your first song now.
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Right on srmorales97.... it feels good to get such positive feedback...THANKS :)
Great read! I just upvoted you. Please do the same and follow
Thank you anziz1993. I don't follow just because, but I did look at your blogs and found them interesting...so...I am following!!! Glad to meet you. Thanks again for the support.
ohhh thank you very match