Steemit Open Mic Week 71 - Original song - True Love by L.A.W
This is our first submission to the open mic. I am Sam, this is Jordan @thisisjordan.
I wrote the song when Jordan and I first met, so thought it was a good opportunity to share it with you.
Shout out to these guys for putting this all together.
@passion-ground @krystle @pfunk @luzcypher
@coruscate
(also - this is Jordan's first time playing bass!! EVER!)
Hope you enjoy it.
TRUE LOVE
True Love
Comes from above
I didn’t want to freak you out too soon
Cause I really like you
Woke up wanting to talk to you
Didn’t want to freak you out too soon
I wondered if you woke up and thought that too
Didn’t want to freak it out too soon
When was it that you knew
Was it at the bus stop
Or when I walked into the post box
Whilst trying to kiss you
True Love
Comes from above
I didn’t want to freak you out too soon
Cause I really like you
Spoke to you in the afternoon
Wondered if you’ve changed your tune
Remember where we were when we heard that tune
That goes do do do do
When was it that you knew
Was it at the bus stop
Or when I walked into the post box
Whilst trying to kiss you
True Love
Comes from above
I didn’t want to freak you out too soon
Cause I really like you
Got an XX feel about with some Pete Docherty looks and Debbie Harry, sounds good for a bit of shoe gazing, nice one. Enjoyed it. I feel like I could slow dance to it in a bar.
I used to get told I look like Pete Doherty a lot! Used to drive me mad at the time. Blondie FTW though!
Thank you for your feedback! Yay! Debbie Harry is one of my idols! Cheers 😊
Tis all good, you make a good pair. Looking forward to your next one. Don't forget to add your songs to the #digitalbusking tag. I'm trying to build it up!
I like the lighthearted way in which you deliver the message in this song. Nice.
I apprecaite that, keeping it chilled out for you x
We need more "chilled out" my friend. Thanks.
Thank you for the support! 😊
Hello @samcook & @thisisjordan,
I'm one of the 5 official open mic judges, please don't forget to mention @soundlegion also in your post, she is a talented artist as well as her judging skills. :) You both did a really great job, the singing was silky smooth and so catchy. Much respect for original music, that is what I am all about.
I have mentioned you in my top judging list for week 71, please be sure to read the full review of everyone here.
https://steemit.com/openmic/@verbal-d/steemit-s-official-open-mic-judge-verbal-d-s-top-5-entries-for-week-71-original-blog
Great thank you! 😊 I’ll check it out. Thanks for the support x
You are most welcome, you guys did great
really enjoyed this guys! great song and the two of you together singing sounds really good. really cool feel on it loved
Thank you! Appreciate it 😊 I’ll check out your page x
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STOPBeautiful song, performed very endearingly :) Huge like, you guys!
Thanks @deeptechhouse - the first friend I made on steemit! Your support helped make this @openmic entry happen. catch you soon buddy
Thank you so much! Really appreciate it 😊
Love it, sending love from Mexico
Thank you! 😊 We will be uploading more songs & videos very soon!
You guys nailed..it....
THANKS shahab!
Thank you 😊
That was really really brilliant! Amazing performance.
Cheers bro
Thank you! More videos coming soon! 😊
A duo like no other.
Thank you! 😊
that's really sweet.