I Want to Live and Die in Your Arms

in #poetry9 years ago (edited)





I want to live and die
In your arms
But it’s a dream for me…


Because I’m not in your arms now
And it grieves me.

I want to share your life
And love
And your loneliness,

The side you hide
From other men,
Yet, I know exists.

I want to bury my face in your hair
Inhale
Snow on the wind,

But the longer we stay apart
I don’t know where to begin.

The moon grieves for lovers apart
Every night it peers in,

But I cannot explain my heart
Or the prison I’m in.

I want to bury my face in your hair
Inhale your mystery

But I fear we’ll die apart
With no history.

I want to live and die
In your arms
But it’s a dream for me…

Because I’m not in your arms now,

And it grieves me.



© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved


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This is not a poem born at the time of loss; it comes later.
It is not the sharp pain of loss, but the endless ache of memories and pain at the emptiness of your future and at all the might-have-beens

Thanks John.

yes, you are right, my friend - couldn't have said it better :)

Beautiful poem @johnjgeddes. There is so much tactile references in this that I find myself smelling the hair and feeling the touches. You have really pulled me into this situation :)
Great work once again John :)

Thanks so much, Bucky - I know you have great artistic awareness - appreciate this

Beautiful !! <3

Nice. I don't typically dig the repeated verses, but it worked well within this poem. I especially liked this line:

I want to bury my face in your hair
Inhale your mystery

Thanks for sharing this.

you're welcome. I didn't like repetition for the longest time, but it can form a cadence if it's simply not xerox reprising of lines.

An aching sense of loss ( or never was!)

Awesome poetry , I love it
And the picture is so lovely .
Thanks for sharing

Before 20, advanced for a hug by 30, next to you on a sofa by 40 and leave me alone by 50. Good bye by 60

seems so true :)

Fantastic poem.I like your post.

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