An Ode to Slack - Original Haiku by @complexring

in #poetry10 years ago

I don't believe what I'm reading.

Things keep changing all the time

near me.

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Inspired by the simplicity of these words... Here is one --

As times stillness remains quiet.
Things change wile I sleep
to wake again.

Gotcha, it was my first one...

I think you need to remove the still in the second line after things. Then, it's a proper Haiku. I anticipate the edit and have already upvoted. ;)

i always maintain that technology takes control of the world over population... as years keep coming, technology is positively responding to ease man's problem...

Sitting on the couch
Smoking a bowl on steemit
Curation is good

The moon shines brightly
Tugging gently at the tide
While we soundly sleep

I do not believe what I am reading.

Things keep changing.

All the time.

C'est terriblement reel car j'ai fait la meme remarque.

Hello @steemed, we are just trying to set crowdfunding on Steemit to get resources to save Abongphen Highland Forest in Cameroon. Please could you help us in our effort? Thank you very much for your upvotes and resteems. https://steemit.com/introduceyourself/@kedjom-keku/do-it-for-forest-crowdfunding-who-are-we-actually-forest-friendly-family-each-11usd-10x10-m-forest-saved

espero poder seguir leyendo sobre tus post .. y que sigas apoyando a diminutos steemiens que estan por ahi necesitando apoyo, gracias por todo <3

it's like a very good content ...........sir ........i follow....you can also follow me for more upvote

I gave @steemed permission to post this on my behalf.

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This Masterpiece is now a Public domain.

I would also like to add that this Haiku is released in the public domain. Feel free to edit and use for commercial and non-commercial purposes without any attribution to the original author.