Poem / Heart Strings

in #poetry9 years ago

Heart Strings

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My heart is made of strings
Each represent the simple things
Every time one is broken
A space is within is left open

A space that is then reinforced
With steel plates and mortar
The area no longer shows remorse
The number of strings have reduced to a quarter

I no longer have desires
To light any new fires
The people that ride with me now
Will be with me until we reach heaven's bow

My hearts kinda cold
I've just run out of coal
To spark my appetite
For social interactions at midnight

I think it's a good thing
Because I've found what I need
And I don't have to continue searching
Don't get me wrong I still interact
And maybe if you ram hard enough
You'll breakthrough my concrete tesseract

By Ethan
2017/07/01

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great work! the watercolor is sick

Sorry the art does not belong to me, but thanks anyway :)

Wow ooooooooooooo nice poem

Lovely poem!

Nic poem i love it

The people that ride with me now
Will be with me until we reach heaven's bow

I love this line & feel like this sometimes, but maybe it is a good thing to be happy with your present company :)

... I just posted a poem entitled '' What is LOVE'' , I would love if I got your expert opinion :)

Let me check
What is love

Thank you :) I am hardly an expert tho ;)

lol! You totally are, ure like my inspiration, and thank you for taking the time to give me advice :)

My pleasure, It's what the community is here for :)

I decided last night that I would start posting some of my poetry and writings on steemit ; your poem was the first thing I saw this morning under poetry and it's pretty cool. although I'm new at steemit I hope I can learn how to gain power to support your efforts Peace @biginkdot

Thank you, As long as you share from the heart all will come to enjoy your poems

Is really a cool one dear........

Good poetry, thank you for sharing, regards to know