Poem / Miracles from above

in #poetry9 years ago

've been doing community service for a life orientation project recently and I was able to connect with some really dear souls and they have forever changed the way I think of life.

Miracles from above

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There are so many complaints in life
How we don't have enough money
How we are burdened with strife
I wish we would all take a look
At these miracle children
They have survived for so long
Without sight, intelligence or ability for song

I wish we would reconsider
When we complain about not being the best
These poor guys can't even see the test

I've been awed byt these amazing little guys
The have the deepest emotional ties
The way their faces light up
When mom pulls up in her beaten truck

They know the sound of love
The are really gifts from above
I wish we'd all think twice
Before we think we have foul dice

By Ethan
2017/08/03

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Hi brother, can you help me, because every post I rarely support.

nice and inspring, upvoted and resteemed. This should make people change their opinion about life, and live in the best they can.
Btw, i also love anime too, and i made some poetry though it's not as good as you , mind if you check it out ?
https://steemit.com/poetry/@lunatic.ice/unreachable-love

Thank you :) I will check it out ;)

Lovely poetry.You deserve for Vote.Please check my post.

I adore poetry and you did an amazing one Love it I upvoted and I'll follow you hope you post such amazing stuff usually wish you can give me an upvote too I'm a new steemer XD <3 All love

OMG you love anime and litterature <3

I wish you'd upvote my comment and follow me I need some support I'm new here and yeah Anime is amazing I love tokyo ghoul and death note and Hunter X hunter <3 All love

They are freaking amazing, my vote isn't worth much

Hmm. Very deep, Ethan. Yes, certainly there are those who squander their talents and blame "foul dice," but given the amount of actual foul dice in this world, it's easy to feel overwhelmed by the burdens. Many people are just worn down from trying to play a rigged game.

Very true, But we should try to change our dice and make them nice ;)

Eloquent !!!My voice for you (Y)

Interesting poem. I enjoyed it :)

What's your favorite poem ever?

I have no idea XD

Haha I also don't know :D Was just curious to see what you would answer :P

beautifully written..

I love this :-)