Poem / Untitled pt 3

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Untitled pt 3

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Dressing up I see
My reflection stares back at me
Why am I going through the trouble of looking neat
When all I'm really doing is going to greet?

It's nearly half past five
I better hop into my car and take a drive
Wall berry street again
It looks as though there might be some rain

Should I park a couple blocks down
So that I can take my afternoon run around?
The parking lot on fifth seems about right
I just need to park my car in securities sight

Now I can take a stretch
Warm my calves and jog past my usual bench
Six is meet up time
Whatever she is going to say's been on my mind


A quick spray of deodorant
A new change of clothes
A quick brush through my hair
With a fine toothed comb

I've got an umbrella just in case
The grey clouds have started to quicken their pace
There she is
Looking a little in distress

That frown doesn't suit you
Smile a bit it makes you more attractive
With that there was a slight flex in her cheek
She was looking way more distractive

Dressed in a form of casuals today
No court I presume?
Her face changed, She stepped in
I could smell her perfume

I asked if you could meet me here
I've been feeling a bit devoid of cheer
If you came to me to have fun
Let me tell you I'm so dun

I'm just done with my current situation
I need to change my frowny salutation
Is that really all you stopped me for?
My heart started sinking into the floor

Not quite
But I don't have the energy to tell you tonight
All things in due time
Keeping things to yourself isn't a crime

The first drop hit me
Funny enough it made it through all the leaves
We were standing under a massive oak tree
Mind if I put this up?

Pulling out my umbrella
I finally got a good glimpse of her
She looked interstellar
Why would she approach this strange fella?

By Ethan
2017/09/11

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That was well written and structured. Great work @xxsenpaixsamaxx !

Part 4 please? I am hooked :D

thats so sweet... good poem with lovely feelings.... keep it up and thanks :)

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Amazing poem, I like poems so much. :)

That was a great poem.
But You made a mistake in the 4th line. It should be "great", right ?

Forgive me for that. I hope you didn't mind.
Sorry. :)

Eyyy XD I don't mind. When i read fast i also skip or misplace words :)

No matter.
Shit happens sometime :D
Keep up the good work !!

Excellent poem!!

hey amigo me gusto tu post ahora mismo acabo de hacerte un #resteem y te seguire...

Beautiful story

Good story bro. I resteemed it!