If that's how you intended to write Jane, then it surely showed! Man, you really have a gift that most storytellers such as myself wish we had. Doug is a great supporting character for Drucker, and I could see how he's a necessity in Druck's life.

Oh, and I heard that this modern classic is being turned into an audiobook?! Suffice to say that I'm supremely excited for that! I know in my heart that you're going to finish out strong! I can't wait to see how this epic unfolds, it'll surely be bittersweet. It's been great going on this journey with you. The ability to interact with the author as the story unfolds is truly an understated feature for Steemit fiction. I'm starting on Chapter 17 now. Bring it home, my brother!