When I Look In Your Eyes - Short Poem

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I want to see your soul,
I want to know you more,
I regain my energy,
And I forget my worry,

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When I look in your eyes,
I see an ocean full of treasures,
I forget the worldly pleasures,
I want to jump in but I'm afraid,
I see high waves coming at me like a raid,

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When I look in your eyes,
I see my own reflection,
Neither that of my face nor my outer perception,
I see my flaws I need to fix my core,
Don't close your eyes I want to look some more.



Beautiful post nuridin ,Keep up the nice work ^^
Thank you @aek081969. I'm glad you like the poem. :)
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Thank you very much. It means a lot to me... highly appreciated.
Nice poetry and this is so deep. I can feel it too. 😄
Thank you muhammad... I'm glad my words resonate with you.
We have a similar style of writing very good.
Excellent. Nice to know you @mikehustleinc I'm glad we do... I'll check your work out.
@nuridin, you write from a deep place within, anyone reading this poem will feel the love and sincerity you express so well! LOVE IT!!
Thank you @fiercewarrior... I'm happy you loved it.. By the way, I started reading your book today and I can't put it down...I'm in page 19 now... I was planning to read small portions of it every day, but it's too captivating... I think I might finish it up before I finish up my coffee now :)
Haa!ha!Ha!..I'm glad you're enjoying the read! Please leave me a review on Amazon, I'm looking forward to your views and how you felt about the book. Your feedback will be much appreciated @nuridin, I'm looking forward to reading your book! Peace.
Amazon review done... Check my last post. You might be surprised. :)
A really, really deep and beautiful poem.
Thank you very much for sharing, @nuridin.
You're very welcome my friend... I love your micro stories and can't wait to read the next one :)
I like this poem. I think it speaks a message I have been working with about perception. If it wasn't for friends and close people I would not be able to perceive who I am only with my own eyes.
Very true my friend. We see ourselves in a much different way when we look through the eyes of others, especially close and loved ones. I'm glad you like my poem. :)
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