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RE: 1st chapter of Stolen Wallets And Where to Buy Them

in #upfundition7 years ago

Is it? Because I'm not sure if it's coming off to vulgar or not. I'd like it to be attention grabbing and surprising in a humorous way. But perhaps it's too vulgar.

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Not too vulgar for me, but I am an Aussie!. It grabbed my attention and I thought it was quite humorous.

Groovy. Thanks :)