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RE: Chapter 1: Quarterlife Crisis: TWB First Chapter Challenge Entry

in #writing8 years ago

The chapter drew me in straightaway. I want to know more about Cara and how she unravels, why she is the way she is, if that is even revealed. What rings the most true is Cara's sense of humor. It is present throughout but serves more as a mask, as if she cannot fathom how to interact with other people so instead fakes it with a sense of humor and feigned ennui. I look forward to the next chapter.

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Hi John- so sorry for the slow reply - but thank you so much for your thoughtful comment! I have the rough idea for the whole novel mapped out- and it is revealed what is at the heart of Cara's behaviour...
I'll have to see whether I'll be posting more here... as yet, I'm undecided :) So glad you enjoyed it! E x

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