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RE: SEC-S30W1: Anecdotes That Teach: Yahya’s Backpack Lesson on Our Flight to Canada
Hi, @kouba01
It's a pleasure to see that you've accepted my challenge, welcome! Here is your evaluation:
It was a great story and a great message. Parents should not pressure but attend is a phrase that is going in my phrase book.
My congratulations for such a well constructed anecdotal story.
| Compliance with regulations | 3 |
|---|---|
| Content | |
| Narrative coherence | 2 |
| Own Images | 2 |
| Message or moral | 2 |
| Presentation (markdown) | 1 |
| Total | 10 |
Hi, my friend. Thank you very much for your warm welcome and for this encouraging evaluation. I truly appreciate your words and I’m very glad that both the story and the message connected with you.