SLC-S31/W1-“Creative Interpretation| The Word (Invisible)”

in Steem4Nigeria25 days ago

Hello dear friends,

How are you all? I hope you are well. I am also fine by the grace of Allah. Today, I have come to participate in the first week of the Steemit Challenge SLC-S31/W1, organized by the Honorable Host @ninapenda ma'am. And I am eager to participate in and learn about Invisible Emotion activities through the challenge, and I am proud to participate in this challenge.

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Create a short story, poem, artwork, or reflection inspired by the word “Invisible.”-

Today is a special day in Raina's life. Today is her birthday. As far as she can remember, there has never been a birthday that her family did not celebrate. But this is the first time that no family has wished her. No one looked for her.
One of her mistakes has separated her from the family. Even though she is seen by everyone, she seems to have disappeared. Last week, against everyone's wishes, she went out to drive a car, and she had an accident, and a child died. Since then, everyone has been avoiding her; no one is accompanying her. They do not exchange opinions. She stays quietly in one room all day. Sometimes she stands on the balcony, sometimes she sits by the window and looks outside indifferently.
But before the accident, they were so happy. Today, everything is in the past. Today, she is invisible to everyone; no one looks at her, and does not answer questions. As if no one named Raina Chowdhury lives here. Her time passed through unbearable pain. Sitting by the window with a sad mind, the visible Raina, like the invisible one, accepted her loneliness and sat by the window.

Explain what “invisible” represents in your interpretation.

The word invisible is used in different ways. There are many things around us that we feel exist but cannot see. For example, we cannot see air, but we can feel its existence. Again, human emotions, love, feelings, etc., are also invisible. But despite being invisible, we can feel emotions, feelings, and love. Just as we can understand when someone loves us, we can also understand when someone hurts us. All these things cannot be seen; they remain invisible. We can understand them in the environment. For example, Rayba understands that no one loves her now; everyone dislikes her. She is feeling lonely. That is why she is lonely even in the midst of everyone. It is as if she does not exist. The visible Rayna is spending time as if she were invisible.
In short, invisible does not mean becoming Venice. Invisible means being lonely even in the midst of everyone, feeling a lack of love.

Describe the emotion connected to your piece.

In light of my story, the word emotion has worked in a strong way. Rayna was beloved of everyone. Everyone loved her. She was very lovable to everyone. But without giving importance to everyone's opinion, she drives it and takes the life of a child. This creates a great blow to everyone. They continue to wait for Rayna in anger and sorrow. Rayna is isolated from everyone. She continues to walk like an invisible person even among everyone. Because no one sees her, she does not give herself importance.
She spends her time alone and lifeless. She sits by the window and looks with bored eyes; her thinking power disappears. She lives a helpless, detached life. Her thinking power also disappears. There is only boredom and boredom in her eyes.
I have tried to highlight that invisible emotion of Rayna through my writing.

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If your interpretation had a color or sound, what would it be and why?

If I get the opportunity to add any word, I will add the word " patience " to Rayna. Patience is a word that can make any person confident. People can make mistakes in life; they can be wrong. This is a part of life. Although Raina's mistake was fatal, Raina will be able to learn from this mistake. She will be able to rebuild her life. But for that, patience will be needed. Patience can play the role of an antibiotic. The invisible Raina will be visible to everyone again. She will be able to win everyone's love. No birthday will be without a celebration. That's why I want to use the word patience with her.

I invite three of my friends to join the challenge
@ahsansharif
@abdul-rakib
@strecoza

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Your story of Raina is not just captivating but well developed. The transition from a love-filled emotion to being emotionally erased reveals more than creativity but reality.

Once, I left a child under a trusted person's care to attend to an urgent matter.
I returned to hear that the child had an accident. The blame from the North, South, East and West rested on my shoulders, the worst part was self-guilt.

I could not forgive myself for leaving the child with someone I trusted. Suddenly, my happy world crashed and almost everyone around did not help matters. I became invisible.

Months later, the child recovered. Today, I almost forgot this incident happened until your story served as a reminder.
Time heals but deep wounds are not just healed by time, but also forgiveness from family, those affected and oneself.

Life happens to people. At times, just words, actions, or decisions can render us into a state of invisibility— heaviness of heart, a place of hopelessness and helplessness, which may not entirely be our faults.

Yet, life goes on. It should not go on in the attitude of solitude but in the love that covers a multitude of offenses.